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Sunday, January 27, 2013
Special Guest Sunday - Eva Scott
Hello everyone! Please help me welcome Eva Scott, as she talks about the inspiration for her book The Reluctant Wedding Planner
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THE RELUCTANT WEDDING PLANNER BY EVA SCOTT
People often ask me what my inspiration was for writing The Reluctant Wedding Planner and I fumble about for a bit before mumbling something unsatisfactory. I’ve been giving it some proper thought lately and I wonder if I secretly yearn to be a wedding planner or a wedding florist? Imagine organising amazing events for people, events that mark such important transitions in their lives – and you helped made their wedding dreams come true! Between you and me, I don’t think I would have been any good at it. One grouchy bride and I’d be off. Better I stick to writing where I can organise as many weddings as I like and the bride is always happy.
In The Reluctant Wedding Planner Georgi is shanghaied into helping dashing rural vet, Dr Camden James, upgrade his sister’s wedding as a surprise for the happy couple. I think my favourite scene is where Cam persuades Georgi to try on wedding dresses. Loads of fun.
See what you think.
Category – Sweet Romance (Calliope, Musa Publishing)
Tagline - Not only flowers bloom...
Blurb -
Dr Camden James is a rural vet, not a wedding planner, so he quickly feels out of his depth when, in a fit of generosity, he offers to glam up his sister's budget wedding in a secret move designed to surprise her. With only six weeks to make this the wedding of his sister's dreams he needs to move fast.
Stumbling around in the largely female world of weddings he gets a lead on the go-to girl for wedding flowers - Georgiana Mac Intyre. Georgi, reeling from a very public breakup, is not interested in men in anyway shape or form. Not even super-cute vets - even when they are clearly interested in her.
Cam shamelessly uses his story to get her to help. It has all the elements; romance against the odds, true love, orphans (you can't have good story without an orphan or two), and a bride.
Excerpt -
“Who the hell are you?” Georgi demanded. “And what are you doing back here?”
Camden James held both palms up in a gesture of surrender. When the lady at the shop counter sent him to the workroom he had hoped for a more welcoming response.
“I come in peace.”
“What?” Georgi couldn’t hear a word over the music. She moved to turn down the volume as the man shouted:
“Me friend.”
She cocked one eyebrow at him, watching as a red flush colored his face.
“Little early to tell, isn’t it? We haven’t been formally introduced yet.” Her heartbeat had returned to normal and she was over her initial fright. Commonsense told her whoever this man was; he wouldn’t get past Irene and the Happy Gardeners if he didn’t have a bonafide reason to do so. Georgi placed the scissors back on the work bench.
“Me florist” she said.
A slow, warm smile spread across Cam's face. He liked a gal with a sense of humor.
“Now that fact we are sure of” he said.
“What can I do for you?” she appraised the man before her, recognition dawning. Mr. Gorgeous, it was hard to forget those blue eyes—or his great butt. He filled her work room with his presence, taking up all the space and the air or so it seemed. This made her feel small and feminine at the same time. Not to mention just a little off kilter.
“I need some help and the kind lady out front felt sure you would be most accommodating.”
“Irene did, did she?” Georgi made a mental note to have a word with dear, kind Irene about meddling in her private life. I can find my own dates, thank you very much. Providing she felt like dating of course, which she didn’t. But for Irene to infer she would be 'accommodating' was a bit much. It was no use rustling up Tall-Dark-and-Handsome as temptation. This was the third time this month Irene had thrown a man in her path.
“Well, I don’t know what Irene told you but I'm not interested in being accommodating.” She crossed her arms to emphasize her point.
“Oh,” said Cam. “That's disappointing. I had my hopes up.”
“Sorry to dash them so quickly but I'm super busy and just do not have time for dating anyone - no matter how handsome they are.”
“I'm sorry” Cam blinked in confusion. “I was only looking for advice on flowers for a wedding. You've been recommended to me by Wendy Richardson. “
Wendy Richardson was one of the biggest wedding planners in Brisbane. Georgi blushed at her mistake. God, she'd even said she thought he was handsome! Hoping he hadn't noticed that bit of her tirade, she wiped her hands on her apron and stepped out from behind the work bench, hand outstretched.
“When you said Irene sent you through, I assumed…I mean, I thought…never mind. I'm Georgiana MacIntyre.”
“Georgiana of Georgi's Garden.” He smiled a slow, warm smile.
Short bio –
I live on the Sunshine Coast, in Queensland Australia with my fabulous husband and gorgeous little boy. When I'm not writing romance you can find me out on the water kayaking, fishing or swimming. When on dry land its all about the shoes and the coffee.
Buy Link –
http://musapublishing.com/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=35_29&products_id=513
Personal links -
http://www.evascottromance.com/
http://www.facebook.com/eva.scottromancewriter
http://www.twitter.com/EvaScottWriter
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Thanks so much, Eva, for stopping by. Makes me think that I might want to be a wedding planner too! Sounds like a lot of fun! Then again, that's the great thing about reading and writing, trying on all these different occupations, lifestyles, choices, and living vicariously through it all.
Sunday, January 20, 2013
Special Guest Sunday- Téa Cooper
Hi, everyone! I would like to introduce my special guest for this Sunday-- Téa
Cooper! Welcome Téa!
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Whether
you are a plotter or a panster you have a picture in your minds eye
of your characters. I know I’m stating the obvious! It makes a lot
of sense particularly if you are writing a romance. A hero or heroine
can make or break a story but perhaps my favourite “character” is
their silent partner. The setting. It doesn’t take the limelight
but it is an often forgotten and very powerful tool.
I
read a review recently of a romance book and the reviewer’s only
complaint was that they didn’t realize until half way through the
book where the story was taking place. Does it matter in a romance?
Possibly not but setting can be a very powerful metaphor and without
it the characters are simply performing in front of a blank canvas.
The
setting can reflect the mood of the story, change the temperature and
give colour and texture to your characters emotions. It is the
perfect way to carry the reader deeper into the story and allow them
to feel your characters’ mood.
Like
the back story it is not something that can be dumped in several
consecutive paragraphs and then ticked off a list of plot points it
needs to be ever changing and woven through the story like the
threads of gold in an Indian sari.
I
was thrilled when many of the reviews for Tree Change made comments
about the setting. “I
could taste the salt on the sea breeze…”
and “The
description…makes me want to pack up my bags and head for the
coast…”
and “The
settings are depicted with vibrancy and colour...”
Truthfully
the descriptions in Tree Change were more by accident than design but
it has become something I pay more attention to now, a tool I don’t
intend to waste.
What
about you?
Tree
Change Blurb:
Despite
her success in the Sydney art world Cassia yearns for the idyllic
life she once lead with Jake in their shack over looking the Pacific
Ocean. Seeking closure she falls, like a recovering addict, straight
back into his arms, and out again equally quickly. Not only has
he taken up with his brother's wife but it seems they have a child.
Truth
is Jake is living a lie, sworn to secrecy and hamstrung by a
promise. Cassia’s fey, artistic character and magical body
possess his imagination and his heart. Can he convince her to trust
him long enough to save the crumbling remains of their relationship?
Here’s
an excerpt from Tree Change. I like to think the setting adds to Jake
and Cassia’s angst.
A
blanket of silence filled the car. It was palpable. Jake could touch
it, feel it suffocating him. His breathing slowed, and time stood
still. The red traffic light registered through his subconscious, and
he slowed the car to a halt. It had started to rain, and the road
surface was slick and black, the streetlights reflecting shattered
pinpoints of light. Large raindrops bounced on the hood of the car.
He glanced across at Cassia. Her eyes looked big and bruised in her
pale face as she stared through the windshield, focused on some space
beyond.
Making
a left-hand turn, he slowed the car, the tires bouncing on the old
cobblestones of the access way. The Harbour Bridge hung, cold and
dark, across the black night sky of the bay. The red and green
navigation lights flickered their warning to the ships passing
underneath. As Jake stopped outside the last apartment at the end of
the wharf, Cassia opened the car door and stepped out into the rain.
Buy
Links:
Tree
Change is available from:
Téa’s
Bio:
Lurking
in the back of Téa’s brain somewhere was the knowledge that one
day she would write a novel. It probably started with a rather risqué
story in the back of an exercise book at boarding school featuring
the long suffering school gardener - not really the stuff romantic
heroes were made of but it was before she knew any better.
Life
and few heroes of her own showed her the error of her ways and with a
baby under one arm, a husband and a half built house she entered a
Mills and Boon competition. To her absolute earth shattering
amazement she won second place – the prize was a bottle of perfume!
Next time she determined she would do better.
But
it was still the stuff of fantasy and her family, a herd of alpacas,
a protea farm and teaching intervened until one day she decided it
was time to do or die. No more procrastination. The characters and
plots that had lived in her head for so long were clamoring to
escape.
In
August 2011 she got serious and joined Romance Writers Australia,
entered the Harlequin Mills & Boon New Voices competition and to
her horror discovered she hadn’t been – discovered that is. Not
even a bottle of perfume this time. But in reality she had won.
Procrastination was conquered and determination set in. It was time
to get serious.
Tree
Change is her first contemporary romance novel and is
available
now. Her second, a historical novel Lily’s
Leap - set in Wollombi,
the time-warp village she now calls home – was accepted by Lyrical
Press and will be published in May 2013. The Protea Boys an
Australian rural romance has just been accepted for publication and
she has recently completed her second Australian historical
novel Matilda’s
Madness - inspired by some of the fascinating characters
haunting the local museum.
When
Téa is not haunting the Wollombi museum she can be found
on Facebook, Twitter and Goodreads or
you can email her at teacooperauthor@gmail.com.
ABOUT
TÉA COOPER…
Téa
Cooper is an Australian contemporary and historical romance author.
Originally
from England Téa came to Australia via India and a few other places
in between. She has lived in Sydney, on the NSW Central Coast and now
lives in the time-warp village of Wollombi near Cessnock.
To
find out more about Téa, or to check out what projects she's working
on right now, you can visit her website
http://www.teacooperauthor.com
BIOGRAPHY:
Lurking
in the back of Téa’s brain somewhere was the knowledge that one
day she would write a novel. It probably started with a rather risqué
story in the back of an exercise book at boarding school featuring
the long suffering school gardener - not really the stuff romantic
heroes were made of but it was before she knew any better.
Life
and few heroes of her own showed her the error of her ways and with a
baby under one arm, a husband and a half built house she entered a
Mills and Boon competition. To her absolute earth shattering
amazement she won second place – the prize was a bottle of perfume!
Next time she determined she would do better.
But
it was still the stuff of fantasy and her family, a herd of alpacas,
a protea farm and teaching intervened until one day she decided it
was time to do or die. No more procrastination. The characters and
plots that had lived in her head for so long were clamoring to
escape.
In
August 2011 she got serious and joined Romance Writers Australia,
entered the Harlequin Mills & Boon New Voices competition and to
her horror discovered she hadn’t been – discovered that is. Not
even a bottle of perfume this time. But in reality she had won.
Procrastination was conquered and determination set in. It was time
to get serious.
Tree
Change,
her first contemporary romance novel was published on 30th
November 2012 and her second, a historical novel Lily’s
Leap - set in Wollombi,
the time-warp village she now calls home – will be published in May
2013. She has recently signed a contract for her rural romance The
Protea Boys and has completed her second Australian historical
novel Matilda’s
Madness - inspired by some of the fascinating characters
haunting the local museum.
When
Téa is not haunting the Wollombi museum she can be found
on Facebook, Twitter and Goodreads or
you can visit her website
or email
her.
Contemporary
Australian Romance
Release
date: 30 November 2012
Publisher:
Breathless Press
Word
count: 40,000
BLURB:
Despite
her success in the Sydney art world Cassia yearns for the idyllic
life she once lead with Jake in their shack over looking the Pacific
Ocean. Seeking closure she falls, like a recovering addict, straight
back into his arms, and out again equally quickly. Not only has
he his taken up with his brother's wife but it seems they have a
child.
Truth
is Jake is living a lie, sworn to secrecy and hamstrung by a
promise. Cassia’s fey, artistic character and magical body
possess his imagination and his heart. Can he convince her to trust
him long enough to save the crumbling remains of their relationship?
SHORT
EXCERPT:
She
dismissed his words with a wave of her hand, but her eyes betrayed
her. He knew her too well. The burn of hurt behind their velvety
depths had nothing to do with the here and now, but everything to do
with the past. His fault? Lyle's fault? No one's fault? Just
circumstance.
"I
need answers, and I need them now. I can't go on like this. Either we
are together or we are not. You have to make a choice: Madeleine or
me. I can't be a convenience you can pick up and put down as the mood
takes you."
"My
feelings for you, Cass, are a million things but convenience isn't
one of them." He shook his head in sorrowful disbelief. How
could she not recognize the bond they had?
"Madeleine?"
Her raised eyebrows challenged him.
"Right
now I can't explain what happened with Madeleine, but her safety is
paramount."
Her
body shuddered as if she was trying to lift a great weight. What was
he doing to her? Madeleine, Madeleine, always Madeleine. "I
can't do this again, Jake. I need to go home." Jake slipped
her cardigan over her frail shoulders and then stepped back to allow
her to lead the way past the bar and up the narrow stairs to street
level.
He
unlocked the car door and held it open. Her skirt caught on the
ribbons of her espadrille. As he leaned down to untangle them, she
flinched. Closing her door with exaggerated care he walked around to
the driver's door and let himself in. He clicked his seat belt into
its clasp before he twisted the key in the ignition. The engine
sprang to life, and he pulled out into the darkened street.
"You
have to trust me, Cass. I know it is difficult, but you just have to
trust me and wait. Everything will be sorted out soon."
Her
sigh filled the car. "Jake, I can't. How can I? I've tried and
look where we've ended up. Me in Sydney, and you living with your
brother's girlfriend."
"Wife,"
he corrected, regretting the word the moment it left his lips.
Buy
Links:
ABOUT
LILY’S LEAP
Historical
Australian Romance
Release
date: May 2013
Publisher:
Lyrical Press
Word
count: 45,000
BLURB:
Born
into the privileged society of the squattocracy, Lilibeth Dungarven
finds herself married, widowed and back under her father’s thumb
all before her 21st birthday - a position this feisty and independent
young woman fiercely resents. When she finally persuades her father
to let her accompany a shipment of horses to Sydney, with the added
promise of her stallion winning at the Windsor races she believes
that her life is finally on the right track. That is until she is
bailed up by a band of bushrangers who are intent on stealing her
horses and holding her to ransom - a ransom her father is not
prepared to pay.
SHORT
EXCERPT:
Lily
could see the pale ribbon of road below cutting through the trees and
the bright blue expanse of sky wide-open in front of her.
“Nero.
You can do it,” she whispered into his sleek, shiny neck and he
snorted in response. Her thigh muscles burned as she tightened her
grasp on his flanks. His muscles tensed in response, attuned to her
body. She gritted her teeth and willed her shaking hands to steady.
“We can do this, Nero. We have to.” Her heart hammered so hard in
her chest she thought it might leap right over the culvert and down
the hill ahead of them.
With
barely a moment’s hesitation she dug her heels into the stallion’s
flanks and urged him down the hill. The last trees cleared and the
sudden heat of the sun stung her face, then she crouched low over
Nero’s neck. The clatter of his hooves on the sandstone surface
told her they had reached the road. The blood raced through her
veins, pulsing in her ears, a violent and excruciating pounding raged
through her body.
“Stop.”
Tom’s command echoed around her as the blocks of the convict hewn,
sandstone walls reared ahead of her. Surely it wasn’t such a huge
jump for a horse like Nero?
She
leaned forward in the saddle and her cheek brushed the dampness of
his neck. Time slowed. With her eyes squeezed tightly shut she sucked
in a great gulp of air and clenched her teeth tightly together. Nero
lifted into the air. His muscles bunched beneath her and he flew over
the chiseled blocks and down the slope. Her knees gripped the saddle
and she dragged the reins almost vertical as they plunged down. Tufts
of wiry grass and small rocks littered the route. She flinched as
Nero’s hooves crashed across them. Gasping in a quick breath, she
prayed for the terrain to level off.
Her
lungs contracted like bellows and what little air remained, whistled
out through her pursed lips. Nero tensed and she shuddered as he
stumbled and then regained his balance. Her heart leapt to her throat
and her wrists twisted as she wrenched on the reins to slow him. He
quivered to a halt. Silver spots danced in front of her eyes and she
gulped in a breath to feed her starving lungs. Nero’s muscled body
trembled and quaked beneath her and white froth flecked his muzzle.
“We
did it, darling Nero. We did it.” The salty tang of his body filled
her nostrils as she leaned over his neck murmuring endearments. She
swayed with exertion and forced her rubbery muscles to respond as she
squinted into the sunlight. Figures on horseback towered above her,
stalled on the road. She had an overwhelming urge to wave her hand
and shriek in triumph.
But
she resisted; this was her opportunity and she had no time to waste.
She cut away to the right praying her memory of the maps was correct
as she searched for the track leading her to Laguna.
“Lil-eee.
Lil-eee.” Tom’s call bounced off the sandstone walls. Shading her
eyes with her hand she stared back toward the culvert wall. It was
empty.
“Lil-eee.
Lil-eee.” The sorrowful echo reached her, resounding somewhere deep
in her gut. Her sweat-soaked curls clung to her face as she shook her
head, raging at her ridiculous foolishness. After such an
exhilarating and successful leap for freedom why did she suddenly
feel so melancholy? Her heels bruised Nero’s flanks and she urged
him away in a fast canter.
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Wow, I can really see how setting can change a character's mood, feelings, actions, and disposition. This drums up all sorts of interesting ideas in my head. Plopping a character down in their element, out of their element, can be a driving force in a story. A character on vacation versus the their daily life?
Thank you so much for stopping by Téa, and thank you for this wonderful insight on the setting of a story.
Sunday, January 13, 2013
Special Guest Sunday - Raven McAllan
Hi Everyone,
This is a very special occasion! Starting this week on my blog, I will have a special guest on Sunday to discuss writing. This week my special guest is Raven McAllan. Thank you, Raven, for stopping by.
Crafts
anyone?
So
what do you consider is a craft? Crochet? Macrame? Water color
painting? Or Maybe you'd say Zumba, ballroom dancing or yoga?
Does
anyone think of adding writing to the list?
You
see writing is a craft of many parts. It's not enough to put pen to
paper or fingers to keys, you have to know your characters, reveal
them to your readers and more importantly…to yourself.
I
think this is one of the hardest things, as an author I personally
can do. Because we are all individuals, and as such all have very
different ideas of how you come to love or hate a hero. We as authors
have to find that fine line that makes the maximum number of people
believe.
That
can be difficult.
I'm
one of those people who don't like a lot of description of my hero or
heroine. I like to make my own mind up about how they look. Give me
hair color, eye color height etc…that's fine. I personally, don't
like to be told they look like the actor so and so, or the politician
you know who.
But
some people do, and I need to remember that. That doesn't mean to say
I do a detailed description of my characters, I don't. It's make your
mind up time. I'm happy if you think hero a looks like actor b and
heroine c looks like the female kick-ass politician D. But
truthfully, as I write he's my idea of a hot-bod, and it doesn't fit
any one person. As long as you have your vision in your head, and you
write that vision, then your readers will get it/him/her.
In
my latest book, A Shimmer Of Silk,) released Thursday 17th
from www.evernightpublishing.com
) which is book two of my series The House On Silk Street, (book one
is Solver Silk ties)I gave general ideas of how my characters looked.
They are very vivid in my mind. However, unless I say er well, my
friend Cairsti's hair, my daughter's eyes and that woman from that
old game show's smile, I can't go into so many details. This is where
I hope I've given you enough to use your imagination. And if you want
to see the heroine as Lily Cole and the hero as Johnny Depp, that's
fine with me.
Here's
a taster or two.
Blurb…
Deborah may not know the full
truth of her childhood, but she knows she needs to find her soul.
During one of her performances at
Silk Street, she attracts the attention of Oliver, Lord Craster.
Known for his extreme tastes, he sensed a kindred soul in Deborah.
Persuading her that their needs
mesh proves a challenge, even to a man of his experience.
Will Oliver be the man she needs
to unlock her secrets? Or will his dominance scare her too much to
even try?
Are the nightmares simply too
strong?
And
a excerpt
Oliver
speculated what was going through her mind as she lay on the bench,
her body stretched and her face devoid of expression.
"Do
it," Luc said. "For the love of God and De…her, do it
now. Do not make her wait. That is cruel."
He
was not a cruel man. Even as he wondered what Luc had been going to
say, when he had stopped mid-word, Oliver held the candle high and
watched. As if in slow motion the tiny tears of wax dripped and hit
her skin. To him it was a caress, a bite of pain, which would morph
into a swell of pleasure, and a hint of things to come. A gift he
could give her. If he thought they had the chance.
"Another."
Luc was insistent. "As we discussed. Now. While she is within
herself."
His
phrasing intrigued Oliver. Nevertheless, he tipped the taper once
more, and created the patterns they had agreed upon. By now his peers
were cheering, the sight of her soft flesh covered in the ribbons of
cooling wax a turn on to all those there. Even if it was not their
own preference, each could appreciate how something so misunderstood,
and called deviant by many, was so necessary to others.
In
one way it seemed an aeon before Luc indicated he was done. In
another scant seconds. He handed the stub of the candle to Luc and
took his bow, before he turned to the woman still supine in front of
him. With what the watchers would see as theatrical, he bent his
head. To all intents and purposed he was offering a soft kiss to her
neck. In reality he moved and nipped her earlobe. "It is over.
Come, make your bow and let us take you out of here."
******
It
was one thing to agree to accompany Oliver; it was another to do it
with insouciance and style. Deborah hung onto her composure by a
thread. One word out of place, one unaccustomed challenge, and she
feared she would fall to pieces. But deep inside her was an
excitement she had never felt before. The recognition of hope and
arousal that she sensed would over come any negative feelings, or
doubts, within her.
He
took her hand and tucked it into his as they walked along a brightly
lit, deserted corridor. There were no doors to break the flow of the
walls, just lamps at regular intervals. "We will see no one
unless you wish it. My apartments are mine alone. Nevertheless,
Felton knows you are with me, and I have given him my word, as I did
to Luc, we will do nothing without your acceptance. I promise you
this also. Our life will be ours. Not for us anything others want, it
will be as we desire." He stopped suddenly and pulled her into
his arms.
His cock pressed against her
quim, and Deborah's breath hitched. Her mouth was dry, as she felt
her juices run. It seemed preferable not to look down, for she was
sure the pantaloons she wore would show the marks of her excitement.
As Oliver's lips touched hers, she opened her mouth and let his
tongue in, to mimic the act she knew they would enjoy later. As he
thrust, she couldn't help but grind her cunt against his prick.
Oliver
lifted his head. "Soon, love. You taste of nectar."
He
tastes of hope.
Within
minutes she was standing in a small entrance hall. Deborah looked
round her, hoping to get an idea of the preferences of the man. It
was bland, almost conventional with cream walls and a pale green a
chaise set next to a drum table against one wall. The only splash of
color was a bright gold and red cushion thrown carelessly to one end
of the chaise. Oliver had evidently picked up on her puzzlement.
"This
is for servants to deliver food etcetera. For visitors to wait in and
for us to pass through as swift as we can. Are you ready? If not now
is the time to say so. You can pull the rope and a servant will
escort you to your room."
Her
stomach was churning but with excitement not fear. The shivers she
felt were those of anticipation, not worry.
"I
thought this was now my room? To share with you? Are you reneging, my
lord?" His face was a picture of astonishment. Deborah couldn’t
help herself; she burst into laugher. "Oh, my lord, you should
see your expression. It is a sight to behold. Truly, if I ever feel
threatened, uncomfortable, or unable to sustain aught we do, I will
say so. My safe word is sauf."
"Your
safe word?" he said slowly. "What do you know of safe
words?"
"Nothing
except if we are to discover my limits, we need to decide on one. A
word which if I utter, you will desist immediately in whatever
activity we are partaking. That is not to say you will not return to
the, er subject at a later date, once we have discussed any
reluctance or questions I may have. Ah, Oliver, do you think I did
not know the reasons why this house exists? Even if our, that is mine
and Luc's enquiries, had not told us enough, Lord Dalrey was
insistent we knew where and the likes of whom we were entertaining."
"And you are happy with
this?"
She
giggled. "Until I taste what you have in mind for us, how do I
know?" Deborah thought it was a reasonable question in the
circumstances. "In theory, I know some activities will be good,
some will push me, and strain my thoughts and mind. Indeed, some
things may be beyond my endurance and I cry stop. But which fits
where has yet to be determined. Nevertheless, I wish to see what you
deem suitable for us. I need, I must,
discover myself."
She dare not say more. Indeed, she would have been hard pressed to do
so. Deborah had no idea how to describe the turmoil her emotions were
in.
He
gave her a sharp glance but didn't comment.
"Sauf
it is." Oliver pushed open a door. "After you."
An
imp of mischief made her curtsey and she saw the glint in his eyes.
"One
day, your sauce will be your undoing, my love, I will remember."
She
was sure he would. In a strange way she looked forward to it.
I've
given you the general picture. You need to frame it…
Happy
reading
Love
R x
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Raven Bio
Raven
lives in Scotland, along with her husband and their two cats—their
children having flown the nest—surrounded by beautiful scenery,
which inspires a lot of the settings in her books.
She
is used to sharing her life with the occasional deer, red squirrel,
and lost tourist, to say nothing of the scourge of Scotland—the
midge.
Her
very understanding, and long-suffering DH, is used to his questions
unanswered, the dust bunnies greeting him as he walks through the
door, and rescuing burned offerings from the Aga. (And passing her a
glass of wine as she types furiously.)
Wow, that was hot! Thank you so much Raven for stopping by. Loved the excerpt. If you have any thoughts/opinions about character descriptions, or about this amazingly hot excerpt, please feel free to post in the comments below.
Saturday, January 12, 2013
Ways to Come Up With Characters
Ways to Come Up With Characters
**Just letting you know, I'm not
condoning in any way shape or form any sort of plagiarism at all.**
I just wanted to say that, as this post
refers to using inspiration from other sources for inspiration for
your own writing. I have found that this method does work and the
end result is usually nothing like the beginning inspiration.
Therefore there is no need to feel plagiarism at all.
So, you are stuck coming up with an
interesting character. We've all been there.
What I've found that helps sometimes is
to take references from other sources to help achieve your desired
character.
(NOTE: That certain writing programs
such as Scrivener you can put photos and source material in the
program and bring it up when necessary. It's neat! I haven't had a
chance to play with it, but the blog entry from Aurelia from December
30, has some great screen shots of it.)
Friends, Family, Movies, Books,
Television, Theater, etc.
So, let's combine them.
My heroine, let's call her “Claire.”
I want her to look like Anne Hathaway from Princess Diaries, and I
want her to act like this girl I knew in college, Khloe, who was
really prim and proper, and had a very overbearing mother, and I want
to give her a distinguishing characteristic of having a long scar
down the side of her neck that she is really embarrassed over so she
wears her hair down all the time over it. I want her to work at a
bakery, that her mother disapproves of. She ran off and got married
at 18, and then her husband died. Her mother-in-law owns the bakery.
She's in her early 30's now.
My hero, let's call him, “Gerald.”
I want him to look like Mike Rowe from Dirty Jobs, but a little
younger. He is old-fashioned, and acts somewhat like John Wayne in
the movie McClintock. He thinks women should be all prim and proper,
and the mother wants to set them up. He wants to buy the bakery and
tear it down to make room for an old west style saloon that would
cater to the tourists and make him lots of money. He has been
considered a playboy.
So, there we go. We have two fleshed
out characters. If I were to continue with this story, by the time I
was done with it, there would be no way in knowing that I started off
with the idea of Mike Rowe and Anne Hathaway. They will have become
their own people. However, by doing this I'm getting a solid
foundation of them in my mind.
Don't be afraid to give them bad
attributes. It makes them more human and more realistic to the
reader.
Give them scars, ticks, limps, bad
attitudes, sarcasm, bald, etc. Keep them interesting.
Next up- Where to start?
Tuesday, January 1, 2013
Being mean to your characters.
Being mean to your characters.
Once upon a time there was this lady
and everything possibly nice happened to her. She met a guy and they
fell in love, and they lived happily ever after.
*yawn* Boring...
As a writer, your characters can become
your friends, family, children, but just because they feel close to
you does not mean you need to be sickeningly nice to them. A story
where everything goes right for the characters is boring.
Let's take Hamlet for instance. (If
you don't know Hamlet, go read it right now... no seriously... go do
it... I'm waiting...)
Our major characters are:
Hamlet
King Hamlet- Hamlet's Dad
Claudius- Hamlet's Uncle
Gertrude- Hamlet's Mom
Polonius- Hamlet's Girlfriend's Dad
Ophelia- Hamlet's Girlfriend
Laertes- Hamlet's Girlfriend Brother
If you don't really know the story of
Hamlet, but have seen the movie “The Lion King,” same thing.
OK, so what if Shakespeare had been
nice to Hamlet.
King Hamlet never dies and they all
live happily ever after.
The ghost never turns up to tell Hamlet
that Claudius killed King Hamlet, therefore never torturing Hamlet
into acting mad and finding out the truth.
Hamlet never acted mad therefore
Ophelia never went off and “got thee to a nunery” and drowned.
Also upset her dad died.
Hamlet never stabbed Polonius.
Etc.
All the complications given to the
characters, whether through their own actions or outside forces are
interesting. If everything nice happens to them then it is boring.
The question the audience would have,
would be “why am I reading this?”
I have to warn about just using outside
forces to affect the characters as that can be perceived as bad too,
as why does only bad things happen to this character? This is a
major problem that people have with the books of the Twilight series,
as bad things just seem to happen to Bella, and she doesn't cause
them, etc. Making the story boring. (Note: This is an example only,
and something I've noticed from reviews of Twilight I have seen.)
When I'm writing, I like to think to myself, "Am I being too nice?"
If I find a boring patch, I make something bad happen. Keeps things interesting.
Next Up- Ways to Come Up With
Characters
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